Reflection: I got
a lot of great feedback from my first 2 elevator pitches. The use of imagery kept
people listening in, which is what I was aiming for. I think the best approach
to any elevator pitch for a new product is to bring up a problem, ask a
question, and then give a valid solution. I tried to improve by including more information to reach the 1:30 minute point and to act more professional.
Hi, Jessica! Again, I think you did a great job including imagery to help people really get a sense of the problem you are solving, and you were able to talk about all the relevant information for your business in the short amount of time that you had. You delivered your pitch with seriousness and a lot of confidence. Great job on your third and final elevator pitch!
ReplyDeleteHello Jessica, I think you did a great job with your adjustments in this elevator pitch. The imagery you had in this pitch was good and you kept me interested throughout the video. I also think you did a good job in being professional and reaching a good time for your video. Being professional is a really important part of giving an elevator pitch, as being unprofessional can turn someone off immediately.
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