Tuesday, October 23, 2018
17A – Elevator Pitch No. 2
I got a lot of good feedback from my first elevator pitch. It was very relatable with imagery and real world uses and examples. I like how I organized my elevator pitch in the first one to give other solutions to the overall problem and having the last solution be my business idea. To improve in this 2nd elevator pitch, I was more professional with better lighting and attire while expanding the story line more.
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Hi, Jessica!
ReplyDeleteAgain, you started out with interesting imagery, putting customers into the "problem," re-living the issues of carrying around tangled chargers in search of a place to set up, etc. Then you went into explaining your solution to the problem in a simple way that is easy to understand. I think the only thing I would change is what Dr. Pryor had recommended for our elevator pitches, which is to set up the camera on a cabinet or windowsill, and stand up while doing your pitch. Definitely better lighting in this video than the previous, and you still covered all the important aspects and included real world examples, which is a great way to bring attention to the problem you're solving. Great job!
Hello Jessica, your elevator was very persuasive in terms of your product. The use of imagery was very effective in convincing me to listen to your entire pitch rather than dozing off, which actually happens very often during an elevator pitch. The better lighting and professional attire also made a huge difference in how your elevator pitch came off.
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