Like Eric's pitch, I like your use of imagery. I can completely relate to your scenario about Business Finance - I studied hours on end and that class definitely messed up my GPA! I like how you used that class specifically as an example because it's one most of us can relate to, and then also relate to the frustration we would experience if our laptop battery died while studying for Dr. Banko's exams. Also, I thought it was a very creative way how you approached the problem with "solutions," and of course the third solution, your business idea, would be the one we all want to choose. I think you did a really great job outlining the problem and how you can solve it.
Hi, Jessica!
ReplyDeleteLike Eric's pitch, I like your use of imagery. I can completely relate to your scenario about Business Finance - I studied hours on end and that class definitely messed up my GPA! I like how you used that class specifically as an example because it's one most of us can relate to, and then also relate to the frustration we would experience if our laptop battery died while studying for Dr. Banko's exams. Also, I thought it was a very creative way how you approached the problem with "solutions," and of course the third solution, your business idea, would be the one we all want to choose. I think you did a really great job outlining the problem and how you can solve it.